The Poetry - art corner to calm the soul

Broken Hearted Dolly
by Kim on Sunday, March 21, 2010 at 2:40am


Why must I feel this way?
As if everyone in this world either hates my guts...
Or they smile kindly at me and use my gently over panic heart.

Why Must I at times cry at night,
feeling so helpless,
So worthless, empity,
And as My life is a joke, that I'm not in on.

I'm just your normal,
Broken Hearted Dolly,
I'm easly used,
and my emotions are taken over by waves of emotions.

Don't you all know?
That the one thing that everyone in this world has the same?
The abouslute power over my heart and soul!
How easly and without much effort,
everyone of you can easly destroy me.
How easy it is for you to pull the rug from under my feet,
sending me into the darken part of my soul once more!

I become panic and feel ashamed of myself...
when you say such mean and bitter things at me,
Tell me that something is my fault...
I will believe you...no matter what you said.
Point out your disapointments in me.

I'm a normal girl, like everyone else.
I bleed red, like you.
I cry at night...
I get so angry, that I don't know what to do...
I get so happy and excited that I scare people...
I sing at random times, and even dance in class...
I get hipper and crazy...
But whatever I do or say.

I just wish that everyone will remember one thing...
I'm just human,
I have my flaws and mistakes...
But I'm just your little Broken Hearted Dolly



† Tainted Dove †

That was really good ! I tried poetry for a while, but none of them were quite as good as that one.

^-^ thank you very much, everyone is good in their own way, you should try it at least, It took me a long time to get this one done that felt perfect in its own way. I would love to see what you can come up with, thank you for your kind words

Mad lovers hate eachother
One is floating in the other
Heat and coldness melt eachother
What remains is luke puke

Ignoring is the symptom
Anger the disease
Unfed heart the cause
Consequence a loss

sorry for posting my poem on your thread. i thought it was a general poetry thread. I liked your poem. Cheers!