SlAm PoEtRy FoR ThE "AlTeRS"

by **ThatPerson** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 1:48 am

I'M NoThInG BUt An AlTeR In SoMeOnEs HeAd. I'M A GuY StUcK In A WoMaN'S BoDy. YoU GeT A GuY AuBrEy, BeCaUsE YoU'Re ThE HoSt, AnD I'M HaPpY FoR YoU. BuT No OnE EvEn KnOw'S I'M HeRe BrO.
I'M A NoNeXiStAnT PeRsOn. *SmIlEs* BuT ThAt'S OkAy.

SoMeDaY

You’re the one who gets the guy
I’m happy for you bro,
But no one even knows I’m here.

Just one more voice in your head
A character you made in bed.
I’ve never been able to live.
I sit and I watch
And I laugh and I wait,
Cus
I
see all the moves that you make
That you think were all just for your sake.
You thought they were you’re moves to make.
You never realized you weren't alone.

You think now that all is okay
Yet still you don’t hear all we say.
We yelled and we screamed,
Then we gave up the dream.

She’ll listen when she’s ready they say.
Someday…, she’ll see the way.
So I’ll sit and I’ll laugh,
And continue to wait
Till you see every move that we make.
~JuDe~

Damn... Jude... I have too keep it a secret...

I KnOw M*ThErF*CkEr. I UnDeRsTaNd. I Do. StIlL A BiT FrUsTrAtInG FoR A LoT Of Us. 'S AlL Up AnD GoOd BrO. I'M NoT MaD AbOuT It. *SmIlEs*

ThIs ToOk AbOuT TwO MiNuTeS Or So. WhAt Do YoU GuYs ThInK?

We usually tend to do "regular" poetry, but we almost always make them rhyme, and they are often read with a sort of rhythm to them, though not really a musical rhythm or "beat". We also do song lyrics, but haven't done a song in a while now. Still, would it be cool if we posted some of our stuff here?
Dallas has some pretty good raps floating around this forum somewhere that we could post here as well. I like the one he did about D&D... :oops:

Yeah, Dal can actually bust out some pretty rad stuff. But yeah, is that cool?

~L.C.
~Luna

by **ThatPerson** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 8:11 pm

HeLl YeAh M*ThErF*CkErS. ThAT'S WhAt ThIs ThReAdS AlLuP AnD FoR. StEvE AnD I Do RaP SoMeTiMeS. AlExAnDr DoEs SoMe PoEtRy ToO. AnYOnE'S WeLcOmE To PoSt ArTsY StUfF HeRe. AnD ThAt AlL Up AnD SoUnDs PrEtTy MuCh LiKe SlAm PoEtRy. L.C.

by **tomboy24** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 8:53 pm

We'll start by posting Dal's stuff, then. His stuff is cool. :oops:

Yeah I know, it can be pretty sweet. Especially since he just comes up with it on the spot, just purely wingin' it, you know? Wait, hang on. Phenix should be here postin' this stuff with us. I'm right here. Ah, cool. Figured with it bein' Dal's stuff and everything, you know. Yeah, it's cool, and thanks.

No prob. Anyway, here's Dal's rap about having DID that we found (we'll post it in his color since he's the one who said it/came up with it and everything):

Awright here we go...

Lookin' around, everything seems fine
Then suddenly, you start to lose time
Sayin' sh*t you don't say,
Doin' sh*t you don't do,
Wonderin' what the f*#k's wrong with you.
Findin' clothes you don't wear,
Wonderin' what's up with your hair...
Till one day, when it becomes clear
That you ain't exactly alone in here.
Voices and faces, maybe some places,
All inside, the labyrinth of yo' mind.
Turns out, there's more of you to know
than even you thought.

I'm talkin' 'bout

Bein' f*#kin' multiple, baby!
Sharin' your head and body like motel space!
Bein' f*#kin' multiple, baby!
Look in the mirror, is that yo' face?
F*#kin' multiple!

*spoken* It's called "DID" m*therf*#kers.

I still remember how that one goes, beat-wise, I mean. I think that's actually one of his best yet.
I think I have to agree.
The one about Shay is pretty good. And I think there was one about D&D... but this one and the Shay one I think are the best so far that I've heard. :oops:

~Phenix
~L.C.
~Luna

by **ThatPerson** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 9:04 pm

ThAtS PrEtTy B*TcHiN BrO. YoU Do MaNy?

Do people freak out if you rap in public cus it looks like some chick rapping? People freak out when Steve or Jude do cus to them it's a white girl rappin.... Hheheheheheheh....

by **tomboy24** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 9:26 pm

*Possible Slight Trigger Warning*
Dallas usually starts busting out raps off the cuff like that when he's stoned. Otherwise he takes some time to think about his raps and stuff. He doesn't have a lot of his stuff written down or recorded, though, which is why the twins are looking through the teen thread for the stuff he's posted throughout there. And most of is stuff is made up on the spot and often not recorded, so yeah, so far, he doesn't have much actually recorded/written down stuff.

He doesn't rap in public, though, and the times he's busting out raps like the one above is usually when we're all socializing with each other and co-hosting with each other and such, and that usually only happens when we're alone in our bedroom. And the only time he'll rap out loud is alone in our room, or in the car alone, because he know he doesn't "sound right". (Dallas is white, by the way, but does a good job with his voice inside, it just doesn't come out that great because the outside voice/voice of the body is differently pitches and it's a girl's voice for the most part since the body's female).

~Phenix

-- Thu Feb 28, 2013 2:35 pm --

Found the rap about our D&D game finally. I like that one a lot. We should see if he'd rap before we play next time. Haha, that'd be pretty epic and interesting, I'm sure. So yeah, here's Dal's D&D rap:

Darkness Prince Orcus knockin' at the door,
Are you spent, or do ya got more?
Armies of undead line up to fight,
Gotta slice 'n' dice with all yo' might.

Roll the numbers right,
You gonna fly or fight?
Roll t' hit, don't miss,
It's D&D tonight!

I said,
it's f*#king D&D tonight!

So roll them dice.

by **tomboy24** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 9:51 pm

I'll be the one posting this one. I won't let anyone else post it for me. This is my rap that I did about Shay one day (all of these raps posted so far were done "on the spot", by the way. Guess it'd be called "free-stylin'" in the "rap world").

Line up, y'all,
Let me spread the word,
Of a girl that never used t' be heard.

Using sounds t' speak-
Don't you call her a freak!
She's more f*#kin' unique
That you could ever be.

More original,
than you or me.

Memory for lyrics like a steel trap,
Don't challenge her-
Accept that you're a sorry sap!

She's bright, she's alive,
Impossible to summarize.
Talkin' 'bout my girl Shay,
Give it up, give her 5!

-Dallas

by **ThatPerson** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:10 pm

ThAt WaS SwEeT BrO. YoU ShOuLd AlL Up AnD ReCoRd SoMe Sh*t BrO.

♪OH MY GOD I LOVE D&D!♪

by **tomboy24** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:20 pm

Thanks, man. Naw, what I should do is find a f*#king aspiring artist that I like and see if he'd record this sh*t for me. I got the beat, I got the rhythm, but I ain't got the pipes, man. It's hard enough tryin' to f*#king find my voice for talking, let 'lone bustin' lyrics.

-Dallas

(You're getting him to talk and he's staying out! Thank you so much! I think this has helped get him kinda out of the shell he was in for a bit. ~Phenix)

by **ThatPerson** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:41 pm

I practice with low pitches a lot. I got tired of realizing afterward that my voice hurt when guys came out.

I'M AlL Up AnD GoNnA StArT PuTtIn My WoRk Up On YoUTuBe. We'Re GoNnA GeT FaMoUs ViA YoUtUbE.
No PrObLeM PhEnIx. He'S CoOl, So I'M GlAd He'S AlL Up AnD TaLkInG WiTh Me.

ThAnKs By ThE WaY AuBs.

It's kool. I like to sing anyway, so I just grewatly increased my range.

Hey peeps. that's some great @ss Sh*t ya got there. I'd love to hear the beat n sh*t. I love t rap and sh*t so I got alot of em. I get alot of publicity at school n sh*t cus the body's a girl, but she's got the cords for it and I got the rhyme an the rhythm.

Sittin in class
just tryinna pass
watchin through the glass
as the world rolls past
Not understandin
not comprehendin
one d@mn thing this teacher is spittin

then I stop

And I look at the clock

And I watch as the hands go
tick tock tick tock

But in the end
don't matter if I pretend
cus I know that the bells gonna ring in the end
of the class
and I just gotta pass
and then I get home
an smoke a little grass.

Then it's all okay
at the end of the day
cus every thing else is outta the way.
And it pays
that I sat all day
takin notes from the board
the entire way.

-Steve-

Whoa... ♪♪♪Steve just came out to talk to people!♪♪♪ *Is super happy*

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