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ONE CRAZY POEM

Postby j. dubb » Sat Feb 11, 2006 2:02 pm

ONE CRAZY POEM
by Jay Dubb

Every day i write the book
yet it springs from wells of subconscious

the images and thoughts make up my dreams and life
could all this be a dream?

As if I was on rocky shore searching for shells
or in forest green

in my mind
or
in a poem

Harken back to ages of old
antiquity and bronze

or linger in a future
of nanotechnology and gigainformation

stop what i'm doing
stop what you're doing

let it be

let it be
just let my mind be free

it's ok if you want to get together
we could just go for a coffee
or hang out
walk in the park

i don't necessarily want to date you
i just want to get to know you

last night i dreamt of buddy holly
he was there
and he was magnificent

i learned from him
how to be real
not to give in to all the hassles and cons
and energy vampires
just stand my ground
don't be afraid of my femininity
and express myself
be focused
know what I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I, I: WANT

(for God's sakes, i just got to know it)

'cause i don't know a heck of a lot anymore

i could be inside this poem or travelling through your computer at a million bytes a second
landing inside your home and calling you on the phone
sayin', "hey man, can you get me some more of whatever you got?"

Ah, shoot... don't make no difference anyhow...

except that i've still got my creativity and my life and my freedom
j. dubb
 


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Postby moramind » Mon Feb 13, 2006 7:01 am

woot!
somtimes, it's like i want to touch these lights, and give into them become them, just a flash for a moment~in this world
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Postby lost17girl » Fri Feb 17, 2006 4:00 am

Very interesting...like nothing I've ever read before.
Love is not like anything. Especially a f*cking knife.
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