Suicide note

Suicide note

Sometimes you feel something burning inside your chest
Those are the moments you forget about all the rest
You feel the anger as it is seeping in
You want to break something, you dont know where to begin

Everyday you drop lower on the scale of life
And you feel the need to reach out for your knife
You feel sadness as it is seeping in
You want to hate something, you dont know where to begin

Compassion is an enigma when you get nothing but hate
You just needed some love but now its too late
You're eyesight goes red as blood gushes out
I'm going crazy i need too let it all out!!!

Tear up the flesh and let out a shout
This is the time to let it all out!
Bloodred its flowing, rushing to my head
Now it's all over, no more time to be sad
###$ this $#%^, it's all over, I'm dead!
###$ this $#%^, it's all over, I'm dead!

I don't know if this is quite a suicide note, but I like it nonetheless. it strikes me as lashing out at something, perhaps that something being oneself. I love the line "compassion is an enigma when youve got nothing to hate, you just needed some love but now its too late". It reminds me of a GNR song. Nice job.

tnx man it means a lot 2 me that u replied on this one, since i higly respect ur own work,

tnx again

And thank you for the kind reply to my reply

Tortured_Mind wrote:Everyday you drop lower on the scale of life
And you feel the need to reach out for your knife
You feel sadness as it is seeping in
You want to hate something, you dont know where to begin

This perfectly describes how I've felt at several different times in the past year. I haven't necessarily been suicidal though, as in the overall theme of this piece, but I have felt that self-destructiveness and sadness. Great writing.

Hey, I know we don't talk so much anymore, unfortunately, really.

But I liked this poem just as I like the rest of them, and I wanted to let you know. But I hope you never leave a real suicide note, in other words, don't even considier killing yourself.

This is a very powerful poem. It is good to vent your anger out in writing, just hope you dont go through with it.