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I WROTE THIS POEM YESTERDAY AND YES ITS TRUE

Postby An0min0us » Wed Jan 11, 2006 3:33 am

The Outcast



I stand in the bathroom

Looking in the mirror

I say to my self

Another day of terror

As I leave the worm house

I say to myself

If I could just last one more day

I will or try to survive the rest of my life

I arrive at school

I look besides me and in front of me

I feel such betrayal

I am an outcast

That’s how it should be

The only time in my life

Nothing agrees with me

I sit in the library

I see friends with friends

It all makes me miss my old town and old friends

Because, it use to make me all so happy

But now I see

I see what its like

To be an outcast

Its not just being an outcast

It’s being an outcast in a new town and new school

Its where you never lived and never really cared.
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Postby Devanna » Wed Jan 11, 2006 1:13 pm

Nice work!

I hope though, that given some time you will come to adjust to your new life and your feelings will change. That's the one thing in life that you can count on....things always change.
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Postby An0myn0us » Thu Jan 12, 2006 2:52 am

thanks I am trying to meet new friends but they all think I am weird.lol.
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Postby Devanna » Thu Jan 12, 2006 12:52 pm

Hang in there, I'm sure some of them are "weird" too. :shock: :D
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Postby An0myn0us » Fri Jan 13, 2006 12:42 am

yeah I met a person who was weird today she said I was beautiful.weird I know I mean I never said I wasnt.
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Postby scarlet21 » Fri Jan 13, 2006 3:26 am

well, to be honest, the poem wasn't good. i don't even think i would call it a poem. but you got your thoughts out on paper. in this forum it's realy all about expressing yourself, not making beautiful poetry, so i guess it dosn't matter much.
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Postby An0myn0us » Fri Jan 13, 2006 3:16 pm

sorry it wasnt good enough for your satisfaction.
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nice Scarlet21

Postby NietzscheWisdom* » Fri Jan 13, 2006 5:49 pm

I think I've accomplished being able to create beautiful poetry and still be able to express what I feel 8) and Annonymous I'm sure is working at it right?
a world abandoned by its creator, a universe in chaos, this wasteland, this killingfield, an eternity of. rotten despair..
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Aw hen

Postby tinkerbellnm » Sat Feb 18, 2006 2:52 pm

Don't see yourself as an outcast, you are you. If anyone is to speak to you, they are the ones to be friends with, don't worry about your first day. I hated my first day at high school. I came from a religious family and was at a private school. I was taken from there to be put in a public school and I went wild. I was an outcast but embraced that fact. Just be yourself and your peers will follow, I assure you. If you try to hard they turn against you, just be you, they will respect you for that. Does this make sense?

Chin up.
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