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Still Remains

Postby me » Thu Dec 22, 2005 7:47 am

Still Remains

Tick Tock, Again Again
Leaves Fall, Once Again
I Feel It Near Again
I Hear It Near Again
Everyday a Reminder Of It Again
Hours Pass Snow Falls Again
Eat Burp Poop Sleep Again
No Changes Today Again
Hopefully Changes Tommorow Again

Beat Beat, Wink Wink Again
Breath Breath, Sigh Sigh Again
Listen Listen, Speak Speak Again
Noone Hears Me Again
Feel It Feel It Again
Lost Lost, Seek Seek Again
Will It Still Remain Again
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Postby scarlet21 » Fri Dec 23, 2005 4:17 pm

nice little twist on the everyday peom you have ther. that again spices it up alot. i understand. when you get into these places, everything is a pattern.
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Postby me » Sat Dec 24, 2005 4:05 am

Thanks for reading it.
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