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Bored in lecture... wrote a few lines

Postby Iddqd83 » Sat Sep 24, 2005 4:05 pm

As i struggled to stay awake during another boring college lecture i thought i'd write some of what i suppose could be interpreted as poetry.

INVU
All, as in days are equal
The answer must surely be wrong
My fear is the solution eludes me
Self loathing protrudes from my mind
An aura of lost opportunity
Envy erodes my will
Fear the enemy kept closer than myself
Contemplating the absolute solution
The value defiantly stays negative
I am a Lone
Everyone needs somthing they can control
Lacking control the absolute solution materializes
My fate transparent

..... and thats were i lost interest in this meaningless mental activity.
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Re: Bored in lecture... wrote a few lines

Postby Guest » Sun Sep 25, 2005 3:37 pm

Very invoking. If this was a meaningless mental activity, I'd love to see a meaningful one!
The brain and heart behind this poem makes me feel there could be no logic to the self loathing, enemy, or absolute solution. There is too much spirit in you for both.
Keep them coming IDDQD83.
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