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Groundeffect (a schizodelic poem)

Postby Jaggar » Mon Aug 22, 2005 1:32 pm

The night is dark
as I embark
on an inner journey
to far-off places
As my own attorney
with the trials he faces

Seeking Truth in the abyss,
confronting fear, experiencing bliss.
Questions are the answer
to balance on the rope
like an acrobatic dancer,
feeding off his hope.

To know what's behind the Door
I have to leave the shore,
And float upon the waves
that cause me to go under,
So I dive into dark caves,
free of lightning and thunder...

Levitate towards the clouds;
the white bridal veil that shrouds
the true beauty of stars, moon and sun.
We hope you have a pleasant flight,
Your stay has only just begun,
now everything will turn out right...
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Postby Jaggar » Thu Aug 25, 2005 10:13 am

So, what do you people think about my "poem"?
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