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by Emma_closes » Sat Jul 16, 2005 3:42 am
That note you wrote me, months ago
Still screams at forte in my ears
It causes me to slur my voice
Until it is legato
Because you cut the chords;
Staccato.
But if I had a choice
I'd whisper in piano
As I wrote you in return.
I'd tie us back together
And twist back incomplete measures
I'm not sure how I'd shape the phrase
But there wouldn't be a doubt
That it would be a natural sign
That would lead us to crescendo
Out of this diminuendo.
You never meant to lose your tempo
It was simply a sharp sign
Of another bad momento.
I know we'd move ritardando
As I'd play you the piano
Just like we were before
I'd smile ivory
And we'd read poetry
And play out how it used to be
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by element » Sat Jul 16, 2005 10:09 am
I like it.
You see, I am a big fan of music, and I've played the piano for seven years, so I like it!!
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by quiet-loner » Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:19 pm
I liked it. Wonderful!
It brought back horrible memories of music lessons though. Do you think you can get post-traumatic-stress disorder from being in the school band?
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by Doctor Plodmanstein » Thu Jul 21, 2005 8:14 am
Don't mean to offend there Emma,
But that piece of work has to be right up there with early McCall and Ted Egan.
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by Guest » Thu Jul 21, 2005 8:54 am
yeeees, McCall - one of the time plodders of poetry.
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by Camel56 » Thu Jul 21, 2005 8:56 am
yeeees, McCall - one of the time plodders of poetry.
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