My Poem "When the golden sun rises"

When the golden sun rises
My lover lay at rest
There may yet not be company
Tho time's a simple jest

When the golden sun rises
I feel my heart at home
From whatever beast is chasing me
I waltz my way alone

When the golden sun rises
I have not fear nor tear
As days of old my life unfold
I cannot come to terms
With all thats lost and never was
Jobs, places, names, and pets
I will forever bear the my name
Till that Golden sun sets

I thought that this was fairly mediocre to be honest. Also I thought that the rhyming was quite poor.