my stupid poem

I wrote this a while back. It isn't really a good poem. I just decided to post it anyway. Usually, I would welcome constructive criticism. But there's really no point this time, because I know that this poem isn't that good. It isn't written well, and it doesn't sound that great. But I'm posting it anyway.

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The writers motto should be;
"Never apologise, never explain!"

yeah. I'm very apologetic though!! And I like to explain some things, but half the time people don't get it anyway.

So how was the poem. Honestly, was it good or bad? I don't mind the truth right now. As long as you're nice about it.

element, the only critisism i could give: aply as lyric writer for wednesday 13th, formal singer from murderdolls. *smiles*

this is a good poem, because it is filled with your emotion, or can be seen as a vent for the emotions of others. i like it very much

*hugs* is there anything else that you could send, or perhaps PM?

actually, I do have something that I could send you or post here. But I'll have to do it later.

You're so sweet TM!!! Thanx for liking it.

element, the only critisism i could give: aply as lyric writer for wednesday 13th, formal singer from murderdolls. *smiles*

Sorry, but I didn't understand what you were saying there.

I'll send you something or post something else later.

Thanx,

~element

GREAT MOTTO QUITE-LONER

and element you should always just ###$ off anyone he tries to change/stop you from coming alive...you know what they say this "awakening/insanity" is contagious

who's trying to keep me from coming a live?

I don't know about this awakening/insanity you're speaking of. I do know that lately I"ve become a part time insomniac that plagued with insanity. DOES THAT COUNT?!!!!

Whatever you say, I like it! I really like it even. And what you seem to look at a fault just makes it so pretty. It's simple, a bit comical even, and lets people make their own image, I can certainly remember that emotion! I really love this poem - it's clever and deep to those who understand the emotion.

And if you look at popular music, you outrank billionaires with that poem alone; don't worry.

Thanx so much!!! Comments like that are really encouraging to me, and I really appreciate it!! Thanx again!!

~element