"Cutting The Pain Away"..an no its not about me

"It seems the world has changed leaving everything so strange;
sometimes I just feel like cutting the pain away, grabbing a blade I place it against my skin hoping to someday have the courage to press in. Its like theres no more meaning to my life..no more reason to stay, Its like theres nothing left to fight for_nothing more to say, this is why I feel like cutting the pain away. Nobody cares rather I live or die, nobody cares how I lived my life. All this pain that I hold inside is too much to take in..sometimes I feel like I can't even breath, now I see how everything is falling down on me. Alone in the dark this is how I break..feeling everything so strange. I try to fight back but its holding me in..something inside of me its all like a dream, its so unreal I can't even think its amazing how its pulling me in. I can't escape what has been planned for me_I cannot change my destiny."

I wrote this one for some cutter in the psych ward...gawd...his expression was priceless_me the beautiful nobody..didn't have a clue I was clairvoyant/telepathic/psi. vampyre...just did it because he looked like Marilyn Manson

thanks for that poem, i can really relate to it in a big way, it means a lot, thanks

I like the poem. I think it's well written, and I can actually relate to it.

GOOD JOB!!

do you think you guys could say something else _its just that I'm sure that if we all got out of the robotic mode..and say something more meaningful once in a while it'll touch me deeper so I could really know what/why you felt when you read my poem...think of the writer, you know DON'T BE AFRAID TO BE HONEST

Honestly, I just really liked this one. I know what you mean. I always feel like I'm just being repetetive in what I say to compliment people on their poems on here.

Hm...*thinks of how to creatively compliment *...I'm STUCK DANG IT. lol

Well, I can tell you a few more things about the poem. I thought there was a lot of feeling in it, which is funny because you wrote it for someone else, but it really did seem to have a lot of feeling in it. I was just amazed at how you could be writing about things that so many of us have felt, if you haven't actually felt them. I'd have to say you've got talent in the poetry department!

~element

btw, was that better? lol It was honest!!

Its just that I'm this really strong psi vamp./telepath and that guy was too a telepath (invoulntarily) I can see and feel what nobody else can it sucks sometimes because of all the negativity _the scarriest part of ebing whta I am is thi 'stigmata-like' pain I'll receive from all those around me...even from those who've passed long before I was even born

but listening to hardore black metal helps me

will you explain this whole thing to me, please? Sorry, but I'm just somehwat confused about what you're trying to say.

ARE YOU SERIOUS>>>*rolls over and dies*

SICKNESS IS THE ONLY WAY