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its beautifull, i really like it, and in some ways i can relate to it

"Thou who openly wallows in thine own sorrow tis but a swine drenched in abnormality"

i like that sentance because it makes me think of how i wallow in my own self pity, self hatred or something else i like surendering myself 2, and the swine drenched in abnormality.. well the swine id say is self hatred.. but not normal self hatred.. its because the swine is abnormal 2 (bit like me)

"Tis not self-condemnation penance enough"

i often wonder the same thing..

its a great poem, really sad though.. what made you write it? when did you write it? and is there a message in it? one that i cant see?

sorry im asking so many questions

PS, as ive said its a great poem, but my oppinion is that you used too many "big words" wich makes it loose its original meaning (the feeling that comes with a poem like this)