My Poem : Incision

Incision

when i wake up i want to sleep
when i sleep ill slip to deep
afraid ill never wake up
afraid i got stuck

caught between the sleep and silence
walking between death and violence
smiling faces when we want to cry
laughing while we want to die

never thought id see the day
when all memorys fade away
living the past and walking the present
accepting death is godsend

this is nothing
this is everything
i'm lost
and you cant find me

talking between the lines and rules
all i see are #####& and fools
dying bodies no life left
our soul was your biggest theft

mirrors relfect my soulless eyes
and stars no longer fill my skies
an empty shell is all you see
just let it end me

Like I said before, you express yourself well through poetry. It's beautiful, yet painful. I write poetry too. I never really want to share it though. I throw most of it away out of fear that someone will find it. I'm often referred to as shy and mysterious. I'm hard to get to know. One of my friends says she likes that about me. Well, sometimes it's cool i guess, but sometimes it sucks. it sucks to half to hide who I am.

caught between the sleep and silence
walking between death and violence
smiling faces when we want to cry
laughing while we want to die

I can really relate to that!! You're poetry is inspiring me to express myself through writing a poem. I haven't written one in a while.

~element

with that answer you made me happier then ive felt in a while

my only wish for my poems, lyrics is to inspire others, make them feel better maybe. like music always makes me feel better.

with that answer you made me happier then ive felt in a while

my only wish for my poems, lyrics is to inspire others, make them feel better maybe. like music always makes me feel better.

Aww (sorry, a lot of people get annoyed when I say "aww" ), that means a lot to me that I made you happy!! I love to make people happy. Now I'm happy too. Music helps me too!! My life is pretty much all about music. I've played piano for seven years, and I just love music. I love pretty much any kind of it too!!

~element

I'm glad that I could help you to feel a little bit happier. You don't know how happy that makes me feel!!

youre more then welcome

Thanks. I wish they had a different smiley on here. I wish they had one with it's mouth closed!!

-6' feet deep into incision
-this blood lust
-my vampyric addiction

that sounds pretty good (im just not that big a fan of vamps in lyrics, vampires are cool though but they make the lyrics look 2 goth like) why did you post this? was there a meaning behind it?

i do like it

HEY! guest above was actually me*__I'd completely forgot I'd posted here ...an NO that was/is just always in my mind
babble babble 'bs'_crap, I'm now officially parentless