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Postby yeh- » Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:11 am

Many a poem has let me down, in the strangest night
Many a person has let me down with all their goods
Many a ego has let me down
Many a time has let me down

Loved you all?
for what the ###$ i am?
why can't i just see that you're all wrong?

oh my words, they pinch me in the down
oh my silence it pins me in the dark

like what?
like writing?

create create
love love

love's like angst
love's live angst

LET GO
LET GO
TO WHAT?
TO YOU

And i can't talk. it bursts the bubble
the ######6 bubble
BLAM!BLAM!BLAM!
haha

jesusito sucedio
jesusito sucedio

'oh you're so ######6 nice'
NO, i'm a ######6 derranged!!

ah.. naaah...
A FOR ###$ SAKE I CANT STOP LOVING YOU

Dr.. i think im a psychopath..
naaah....
lol.

actually i think i'm FINE
wanna come ON?

i just want to know
IF loving so much is just ego
IF hating so much is just ego
Of writing so much is just ego
If judging so much is just ego

If making love is my salvation-
IF exposure is my salvation-

like god
like god
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Postby jester » Tue Sep 04, 2007 9:50 am

Yeh- this is a strange one. The ego thing really gets to me too sometimes. I especially liked this -

"And i can't talk. it bursts the bubble
the ######6 bubble"

For me it sums up the frustration of so many experiences in life.

Nice one

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Postby gpierre » Tue Sep 04, 2007 2:59 pm

e.e. cummings comes to mind.
Nature abhors a vacuum.
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