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Push/Pull of BPD

Postby ScarletSorrowfulRose » Sat Feb 06, 2016 3:49 am

This one is brief and I'm a pretty bad writer but I wanted to put it up anyway.

And I’ll hold you close
To push you away
Like a suicidal rose
Who can’t keep her place

And I’ll cut you deep
To pull you back home
Like a stupid girl
Who can’t be alone

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Re: Push/Pull of BPD

Postby StarbucksLovers » Tue Mar 15, 2016 10:20 am

That has a very genuine, natural and raw feel to it. You could structure that into a good song, I think it would be pretty good. If you're interested I'll help you.
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