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I wrote a poem :)

Postby dmk777 » Mon Dec 21, 2015 8:20 am

Hey all I would like to just say this is my first post and hi to you all.

I wrote this poem which I'm sure you may relate too.




THE ENTITY EUPD

Consumed by its deep roots into my personality this awful burden EUPD,
I feel emotion intensity much like burning alive from the inside out of me,
If you should be the chosen one God help me because the fear of abandonment will over take me, pushing and testing to see how much I mean to you It will end in me losing you ,
I hurt so bad and the pain consumes me like the mental version of a burns victim.
Imprisoned by this evil entity is exactly how it feels to me,
Prick my gentle skin and watch me emotionally bleed to death you'll see how this burden EUPD is me or one of my many personalities.
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Postby Smelljasmine » Tue Dec 22, 2015 10:16 am

Really good. It makes me feel your pain.
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Re: I wrote a poem :)

Postby dmk777 » Wed Dec 23, 2015 7:47 pm

Hey thank you that means a lot. Writing it into poem helps me release.
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Postby Smelljasmine » Thu Dec 24, 2015 1:30 am

Me too. Writing is a release.
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