Away

Eyes forced wide open
blood cold running through veins
through the window you see me
from a distance away.

Focus dismal and weak
working with broken threads
A life that is miserable
Everyday that I dread.

The mind is a map
full of vast destination
but the world is a trap,
with its vile infestations

Whisk me away from this setting so fake
Help me before -my bones start to shake.
Take away from me this cloud of misfortune
promise it never turns black.

The truth left unheard
as it always will be,
and the lie is a word
that we all do repeat.

Bring me afar from a place that I loathe
Save me before decay starts to close.
Take away from me this shadow of fear
show me the knowledge I lack.

[go easy on me.. im a rookie]

it sucks...

nah just kidding its very refreshing

nice flow and a meaning not lost in the stream of words
seriously if you like music you should try singin it on chords
atleast this piece of poetry didnt get me bored
dear rookie.. you scored

welcome