Two short poems

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beautifull and nicely spoken

Thanks Tortured Mind, I appreciate the sentiment.

Both of these poems are really good and they seem to work well next to each other. I really like these entries because I find them to be well written and dynamic.

It’s good to read shorter pieces sometimes as they leave you with a more focused meaning to process. ..that’s what I think anyway.

Thanks for the compliments.

You have to understand that It would be next to impossible for the average reader to decode the entire embedded intentions of what you have produced. It is awesome that you have your meaning so well developed, but the meaning, when reading something so technical, is going to be different and vary within the individual minds of the many who read it. Wouldn't you say?

Yes, I would definitely say .