Life and advice1

This is life nothing more or less.
All the tears and sadness that’s what it is.
Your fears will come true here I promise.
Well there’s still time to be happy don’t miss it.
Things will kill the good times; I insist that you hold a head up high.
Try to fill this with what you want. Don’t let life mold dead insides for you.
Why let it control you? Would you just give up? Gold is more then a metal.
I bet it’s hard to gain control. I could let go. Gold is as good as the eyes that see it.
Just push the pain out of your mind don’t let go.
Must you go insane at least you’ll find what I bet most haven’t.
Lust the tearless days. Feast upon those moments that smile.
Happy moments come your way. Let them last a while.
Some fearless people always say you make the happy days.

I love how your poems always have an important message in them! You're a very perceptive person- you have a very realistic and deep sense of the world, and I'm glad that you wrote out some of what you've learned from life in this poem.

"Try to fill this with what you want. Don’t let life mold dead insides for you."
-I like how you put this, very interesting and thought-provoking... Are you saying that you should always hold into hope, and live life in the way that will make you happy? That's how I interpreted it, at least.

"Lust the tearless days. Feast upon those moments that smile.
Happy moments come your way. Let them last a while."
-Very good advice. I do my best to appreciate the good days when they come around, although they are often short-lived. Very important about letting them last awhile.

"Some fearless people always say you make the happy days."
-GREAT ENDING... I've always wondered whether or not this is true... I think that a good attitude can definetely improve life situations, but then again you can't control what difficulties life throws at you.

I am a very observant person i notice everything and take it all in and anaylize it, its partly why i am so quite.

""Try to fill this with what you want. Don’t let life mold dead insides for you."
-Are you saying that you should always hold into hope, and live life in the way that will make you happy? That's how I interpreted it, at least. "

Yea your pretty much got it. Do what you want and what makes you happy and dont let your surroundings make the decisions for you or make you sad.


"Very good advice. I do my best to appreciate the good days when they come around, although they are often short-lived. Very important about letting them last awhile. "
I hope the advice helps you, sometimes people hold on to the wrong things such as bad memories or times when there are perfect good memories to cherish.

"GREAT ENDING... I've always wondered whether or not this is true... I think that a good attitude can definetely improve life situations, but then again you can't control what difficulties life throws at you." I do agree that you are not always incontrol but as you put it it is a good attitude to try to make every day a good one no matter what.

I hope you had a nice day