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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby Knoxious » Sat Apr 14, 2018 10:18 pm

An evening like this
A tad cold, very serene
We're living in bliss
Antihistamine

Outside on the deck
Waves of wonder
Just a turtle neck
No blunder
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby seabreezeblue » Tue Apr 17, 2018 10:22 pm

No blunder
can't..

the words are too far away..
too far to see
too far to hold..
too far for winds to rush in.. cold.
Shine me a light up
and i'll run round the moon..
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby Knoxious » Wed Apr 18, 2018 3:05 pm

Too far to see
The repression in me
Stings like a killer bee
I'm floating in the yellow sea

Life confined to a tepee
Count me as an absentee
I'm off to the cherry tree
Was about time that i flee
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby Kimera » Wed Apr 18, 2018 9:56 pm

Life confined to a tepee
Makes it difficult to peepee
My disposition is low
Because I have no where to go
And this damn last line won’t rhyme
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby Knoxious » Thu Apr 19, 2018 1:57 pm

And damn this last line won't rhyme
I can't put in the overtime
To make this sublime
Just looking like a pantomime

Feel better with a pie of key lime
Best food for the springtime
To activate my enzimes
Passing up should be a crime
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby Kimera » Wed Apr 25, 2018 1:08 am

You’re just looking like a pantomime
A parody of what you were supposed to be
Shatter the glass and
The shards pierce a soul
He never knew she had
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby Knoxious » Thu Apr 26, 2018 4:12 pm

The shards piece the soul
From the house of glass's hole
Allow your feelings to unroll,
Damage control.

All the way from the north pole
To the tribe of Seminole
We pack our bowls
A let heads roll.
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby Kimera » Thu Apr 26, 2018 8:56 pm

Allow your feelings to unroll
Tear your flesh and bare your soul
No escape, nowhere to hide
From the thread that cuts you deep inside
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby Knoxious » Thu Apr 26, 2018 10:11 pm

No escape nowhere to hide
you are a victim of your pride
drop the mic and step aside
i'll cut your intestines and have them tied
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Re: Pick a line from the poem above..

Postby seabreezeblue » Thu Apr 26, 2018 10:16 pm

from the thread that cuts you deep inside
a flicker of light
starts to arise..

a murmur
a glimmer..
sighs in the night
as the smallest of hope..
flows through the skies.

(cross posted with knox.. so following from his as well)

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drop the mic and step aside
i'm in control
let's go for a ride..

singing and dancing
through blackened soft eyes..
drop the mic
we'll take to the skies..
Shine me a light up
and i'll run round the moon..
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