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Postby all_in_my_mind » Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:28 am

i should be upset. i am mildly upset. but instead of crying or thrashing about...i dance. wildly in front of my full length mirror. covered in dust and hairspray. you stood me up. what the ###$? you chose her over me. but i don't care. i laugh. i dance. i am free.
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Postby Tortured Mind » Thu Sep 21, 2006 6:34 am

your work is outstanding to say the least, breathtaking even

and few word are ever spoken as true as your own

i salute you and bid you welcome

or is it all happening in my mind ??
“The goal of all life is death.”
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Postby all_in_my_mind » Thu Sep 21, 2006 7:16 am

wow. coming from you? crazy. i was just reading through your poems before i posted my own. you are a true talent i must say. the way your words flow together from one line to the next is completely entrancing. and the truth you speak with no attempts to filter anything out. so honest. so brave.

i am blushing at your kind words. so thank-you very much.
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Postby Apache » Thu Sep 21, 2006 1:24 pm

all_in_my_mind wrote:i should be upset. i am mildly upset. but instead of crying or thrashing about...i dance. wildly in front of my full length mirror. covered in dust and hairspray. you stood me up. what the ###$? you chose her over me. but i don't care. i laugh. i dance. i am free.


I liked this.

And thats a great title.
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Postby Oakchair » Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:33 am

all_in_my_mind wrote:wow. coming from you? crazy. i was just reading through your poems before i posted my own. you are a true talent i must say. the way your words flow together from one line to the next is completely entrancing. and the truth you speak with no attempts to filter anything out. so honest. so brave.

i am blushing at your kind words. so thank-you very much.


All_in_my_mind there are diffrent types of poems and each are just as good(im my opinion) Just because yours dosint flow like tortured dosint mean they are any less you just have a diffrent style and put together words diffrently.
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Postby Tortured Mind » Fri Sep 22, 2006 12:22 pm

im not wasting my breath
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