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###$ this ###$ me ###$ everything this is #######4 i cant do it i have no talent this is just crap i admit most of it is im sorry ###$ this im going i hate this never mind i dont care im wasting my time but i..

nvm.. i just hate that my poems just suck like this... that im so dull and my vocab is so limited.. and my brain is exploding but i still feel empty like $#%^.. nvm.. nvm.. nvm.. i just wrote this so maybe the ###$ up feeling would go away.. so i gues ill even post it..

Tortured_Mind wrote:###$ this ###$ me ###$ everything this is #######4 i cant do it i have no talent this is just crap i admit most of it is im sorry ###$ this im going i hate this never mind i dont care im wasting my time but i..

nvm.. i just hate that my poems just suck like this... that im so dull and my vocab is so limited.. and my brain is exploding but i still feel empty like $#%^.. nvm.. nvm.. nvm.. i just wrote this so maybe the ###$ up feeling would go away.. so i gues ill even post it..

What? No, this was good. Morbid, but very good just the same. Your certainly not dull and your vocabulary is far from limited.
What I like about your poetry is you ability to lack boundries and still end up with a nice piece. Your poetry makes me feel, and that is what makes it so beautiful. I feel anguish when I read this. Pure agony. Although that is not a really pleasant feeling, it is very powerful. You get your point across. Great imagery. I feel like I am in that corpse
Do not let this gift go to waste because you lack self confidence. I'm sure I speak for everyone here when I say I enjoy reading your work. Don't judge it so much. Just write and make mistakes and fix them, or not, and thats what makes it real, uncut, raw, human. Get me? Your work is very powerful, very beautiful and will be recognized for it's full potential some day. I wouldn't just say that unless I meant it. So take it. Keep sharing your work with us. It's really great. take care
Amy