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by Caged In » Sat May 24, 2014 1:05 am
I wrote this piece while listing to some Zevon, to express my thoughts...
and to ask you, my viewer, if I'm any good at poetry
I sit here now,
watch this old screen;
type the letters,
say it'll be alright.
But the world,
she changes fast;
'fore I can blink,
I miss yesterday.
Sure I can learn,
better myself;
pick my feet up,
start to walk again.
But I see now,
that ain't the point;
the point of life,
that's living, pal.
I ain't living,
'less I take time;
tell myself now,
follow the path.
Blaze the trail,
settle myself;
new beginnings,
a home with friends.
But until then,
my long old ride;
she will not end,
until I begin.
A man is but the product of his thoughts.
What he thinks, he becomes. -Mahatma Gandhi
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by p0ster » Sat May 24, 2014 7:23 am
i thought it was beautiful

i think you will be a great poet if you did go into poetry
If you don't want people to know about it, don't put it out there.
Think before you post.
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