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Postby overdose » Wed Jul 19, 2006 4:19 am

when the angels have flown,
you find your all alone,
when the demons are here,
you find blood in your tear,

when the tears run red
you find it hard to get out of bed,
when the tears run blue,
you know what you must do,

when the sun's in the sky,
you lay on the grass and cry,
when you look up at the rain,
all your memories drain,

can't remember your name,
all thought's are the same,
you know the demons are here to stay,
you know they wont go away.
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Postby drama_queen » Thu Jul 20, 2006 2:08 am

Hey Overdose,
Your poem is very powerful and well-written, and I definetely feel like I can relate, especially with the feeling of hopelessness. I do hope, however, that you can find the strength to overcome your demons, even though right now it seems impossible. Good luck, and know that we're here for you!
Take care,
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