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“The goal of all life is death.”
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Postby Kayty » Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:07 am

Hey tortued

Just wondering what made you right this. And if you need to talk about anything. I know you dont like to post in the other forums so I figured I'd try to be her for you on this one. Poetry is a way to show your emotions without actually saying exactly how your feeling and I think that you need someone to talk to as much as the people in the other forums.

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Postby Tortured Mind » Sat Jul 15, 2006 2:26 pm

actually everything is wrong and my world is shattering apart i feel myself driffting farther and farther away from reality and i wont do nothing too stop it its like i disserve too fall down into this black hole i do long for

i dont have anything in particular bothering me or ailing me but i do feel down and stupid for believing in this forum (example nr 1) non of you really likes me you prolly think im making things up or just seeking attention

i am just a kid sitting behind his comp but even the little people inside the computer arent nice 2 me maybe that just the way i enterpret this all

would you guess im not actually english ? prolly would...
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Postby Chucky » Sat Jul 15, 2006 3:39 pm

Hey,


You don't deserve any of the pain in your life - Nobody deserves it, ever. Think of it as a flaw in the genetic make-up of life, that we sometimes feel pain.



"you prolly think im making things up or just seeking attention"

There is nothing wrong with attention-seeking. It is a cry for help. Too many people dismiss attention-seeking of this nature as feigning (psychological) illness.



"non of you really likes me"

...I like you. It would be against my nature, and against morality to dislike you.


Where are you from?

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Postby Kayty » Sat Jul 15, 2006 4:47 pm

hey torture,

You do not deserve anything bad. Nobody does. And I like you and so do many others it's just that when we try to help you you shoot it down. Try to be a little more open minded with other's and they will be more open minded with you. I think you an awesome person and that you just need to realize this for yourself. I hope you do realize this one day.
Take care,
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PS. I tink your poem was wonderful.
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Postby Chucky » Sun Jul 16, 2006 4:32 pm

Sorry, I never commented on the poem: I like it because I have a huge interest in Anatomy and the imagery used in the poem, although dark in nature, is wonderful because it reminds me of the wonders of the human body.
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