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Postby Kayty » Thu May 25, 2006 6:48 pm

You hold the razor blade in your hand
Thinking should i do it or should i not
You think its the only way out of this pain
But as time go's by you start to regret
you'd ever do such a thing
Theres scars all over your body
A constent reminder of how terrible you feel
And although the pain went away for the moment
It starts to come back soon after
And after you say "it will never happen again"
You find yourself standing there
In the same spot as the last time
With the razor blade in your hand
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Postby aimdog » Thu May 25, 2006 7:19 pm

YES! Another really good one. But really sad. You should take that class like I told you. Or maybe you don't need to, I think your poetry is getting better the more you write.
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Postby Kayty » Thu May 25, 2006 7:21 pm

Thanx...r u gonna look for that class for me.
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Postby aimdog » Thu May 25, 2006 7:26 pm

oh yeah i told you I was gonna do that. Yup I'll look and then send you the info. k?
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Postby Kayty » Thu May 25, 2006 7:29 pm

ok...damn your as bad as me with the whole short term memory loss thing
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