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Am I Crazy?

Postby Kayty » Wed May 24, 2006 6:56 pm

I was hearing noises all around me
It felt like things were closing in
I seen something out the corner of my eye
but i looked and it wasnt there
I started to back up into a corner
Terrified of the way i felt
Sweating I started to feel disy and sick
As the world was closing in around me
Something was wrong, really wrong
But to the world i seemed alright
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Postby NietzscheWisdom* » Wed May 24, 2006 7:23 pm

you let the dead get in!
a world abandoned by its creator, a universe in chaos, this wasteland, this killingfield, an eternity of. rotten despair..
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Postby aimdog » Wed May 24, 2006 7:33 pm

NietzscheWisdom* wrote:you let the dead get in!

What?

That was really good Kayty. I can't wait to read more. luv ya!
"An eye for an eye leaves the world blind." -- Gandhi
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Postby Kayty » Wed May 24, 2006 7:33 pm

Thanx amy i appreciate it a lot...it good to have a good reply cuz the other one kinda freaked me out
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Postby aimdog » Wed May 24, 2006 7:38 pm

Yeah, she can be very dark sometimes.
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