How is my first blog entry?

I've taken the advice of a member on here to write a blog entry regarding my father, his alcoholism, and his effect on me. I've linked a rough draft to my signature, and hope it gives insight to my life. I'm hoping to receive feedback on it, and tips on what to add, take away, or improve if necessary.

Here's a link to it:

blog/ABC90210/my_father_is_a_monster_who_has_ruined_mostall_of_my_life._b-7140.html

What do you think? What should I add? What should I remove? What would you write?

I've approved the draft so that people can see it. It's good, it lays things out plainly.

Your blog is your place to think in text. At least, that's how I use mine. So I don't think it matters too much how other people find it. If they have questions they may leave a comment. But mostly blogs are read only. They don't start conversations so much.