who's on your side

Ideas please I want to write a short essay on this.

Now are teams decided by the team sorter but what if there was no sorter who's on your side?

Pschychiatrists want to get you out of the hospital but at what cost? Tax deductions for being in the hospital but then loss of possible working time or studying time. Who's on your side?

Family grows bonds but bonds are meant to be broken, literally and figuertilly.

If people don't smarten up we'll all end up in a hospital run by non-sense and hopes and dreams that could or could not be.

Family needs to help but what if the family has started using you as some guard against some outside phenonem.

Who is on your side?

Hey,

Your post is a bit incoherent. I mean, you've asked us for ideas and then you go and give a lot of ideas yourself. Some of them I just don't understand though.

"Now are teams decided by the team sorter but what if there was no sorter who's on your side?" - This sentence makes no sense to me, sorry.

"Family grows bonds but bonds are meant to be broken, literally and figuertilly" - Again, I don't get it.


Maybe you could write about a guy who was forced into a psychiatric hospital by his family because he was always shouting abuse at them at home. He had also dropped-out of college, and had no urge to get a job. Plus, he frequently broke-down in tears due to severe depression. You should write the story with him as the victim though. Maybe he was abused in his past but nobody in his family knew about it because he was too ashamed to tell them.

Anyway, while in the hospital, he meets some great people there and eventually decides to escape with some of them. From there, the story is yours... ..


Kevin.

Chucky: Who should decide who should be the team sorter? The first person to speak, or the last person?

I cannot answer that - sorry - because I don't understand what 'team' you are referring to.

maybe it's not a team or more a group of people. Liberals and Conservatives for example.

Ummm, maybe the guy in the hospital is someone famous and is a secret friend of the state governor. The state governor then secretly gets him released from the hospital against the rules. The local - and then national - media then hear about it and a huge scandal erupts.

Kevin.

or maybe he stays faithful to his doctors respecting his doctors beliefs and goes on to be released properly into the community.

... ...it's your story. All the decisions are to be made by you. Why did you even mention Liberals and Conservatives though? Some of your posts are very confusing for me.