Hi,
I have 2 suggestions for improvement.
1: would you like to strenghten your truth about psychiatry by explaining psychiatry as a rhetoric, mental disease as a rhetorical metaphor for unacceptable behavior, [forced] drugging as a chemical restraint, psychiatrists as jailers, hospitalization as imprisonment? Reference: Thomas Szasz @ www.szasz.com
2: Would you like to consider explaining psychiatry is a religion, very brutal one, where human rights are violated in favor of torture which is used as a method of changing unacceptable behavior? Torture results in more damage to the victim and to the society than any behavior it was supposed to change. Rhetoric is used to advocate the religion, and to justify crimes against humanity, incl. nonstop ongoing abuses of human rights.
Historically, people believed in witchcraft as a religion and burned any victims who seemed to have done anything unusual, or were around when something unusual happened. Victims were set on fire while alive. Even christianity was used to cut hands or otherwise brutalize and cripple normal healthy people who in the eyes of the religious groups have sinned.
Today, the religious group is psychiatry. Historically, the strong believers have tortured victims for any unacceptable behavior or thoughts, threw them into snake pits to scare them, resulting in many deaths, drown them in the water to cause an intentional brain damage, cut into their brains through the victims eye sockets in psychosurgery, damaged their brains via torturous electric shocks, and today they damage victims brains via toxic drugs that keep victims semiconscious and unable to defend in any way. For talking back, the drug dose gets increased, and the normal, healthy victim is called "severely delusional", and indefinitely imprisoned by strong believers and extremists of this mainstream religious group.
Strong rhetoric is used for advocacy and justification, as well as to convince non-believers to believe in this religion, and to torture others. Historically, other torturous religions were taught at universities, and undoubtedly at the time of witchraft people were learning how to identify and brutalize witches. There were "experts" who did that, and other "experts" who could use the language and words in such ways as to persuade others. Historically, 4 centuries BC, Aristotle taught the art of persuasion, and undoubtedly we have a powerful religion which persuades the majority of educated men, exploiting our historical weakness of believing "doctors are gods who know everything". [Except they don't, they have a blind religion, and others who know what they are doing just like to torture, imprison, brutalize, exercise power over victims, and get paid for it. If they did not like torture, they would not do it. At the time of witchraft, these same extremely religious people would burn witches - innocent victims, and they would now brutalize those who were non-christians. In an environment with a (nearly) 100% psychiatrist religion, believers punish victims by execution as brutal as when islamists find non-believers in a (nearly) 100% islamic environment.]
P.S.: anyone who himself or herself behaves in an unacceptable way gets punished by drugging which is a chemical restraint, preventing you from any deep thoughts, making you unable to defend, to work, to study, or to care for yourself. And secondly, you will be make "harmless" and "helpless" via drugging, but also "suicidal" and it is not a side-effect, it is a direct effect because of how badly disabled the drug will makes you.
And secondly, if you feel bad or have any unacceptable behavior, the only thing psychiatrists can do for you is to imprison you in a hospital, and force drugging on you, to make you "harmless" to yourself and others, and at the same time "helpless" and "sucicidal". So in reality only "harmless to others" and deeply damaged, tortured by the drug.
Therefore you are the only one who can help yourself in case of any problems with your feelings or behavior or thoughts. Nobody else in the world has answers to your problems. Everybody's problems are different, and that's life, that's normal. If you are most of the time alone, or not talking to anyone, you become disagreeable in the eyes of others, and they may complain and psychiatrize you / brutalize you as a revenge and punishment. This punitive effect is all psychiatry has. If you come yourself and complain about yourself, they also only give you a punishment.
Those who were tortured and imprisoned in hospitals always got out only when they BSed that the drugs are helping and making them feel better. Quacks know the drugs are restraint, they know they are making you disabled, they know you feel worst in your life, they also know they can BS you to make you believe that you need those drugs [without telling you why], and that those drugs are good for you [without telling you how or why]. Here is how and why: you need those drugs to be harmless to others, and you are BSed to believe they are good when they are only good for others who want you harmless. Disrupting brain function, making you sick and weak, poisoned, intoxicated, and suffering torture. That is all these drug do, all to make you harmless to others.
These is absolutely no help in psychiatry, never was, never will be. Those who had a life problem and recovered could as well do so without being tortured, BSed, chemically restrained, deprived of their rights, and stigmatized for life.
There is no man in this world who cannot decide for himself, but can listen, speak, and read and write meaningful things other people can understand.
Psychiatry is a religion with some of the most extremely religious fanatics who studied it, torturing others for not believing, or not knowing, or not obeying their extremists bible. Remember, in an environment with a (nearly) 100% psychiatrist religion, believers punish victims by execution as brutal as when islamists find non-believers in a (nearly) 100% islamic environment.