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Confusion in the mind

Postby mcrguff » Fri Dec 15, 2017 8:52 pm

When i think about it it doesnt make any sense
but when i do it just suddenly ends
i dont know what to do, or how to handle it
maybe is just my mind that has dangled it
How do i handle these emotions?
How do i portray different motions?
It feels like my mind is travelling oceans, people portraying different deep devotions.
wasting their time, but never bothering to get energy to reach their prime,
climbing the ladder, once they make one misstep they know their dream is gonna shatter.
what does it matter, broken dreams always scatter minds getting flatter, out of the hope they lost
looking back at all the chances that they tossed.

I know, im an amateur but a start right?
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Re: Confusion in the mind

Postby serpand » Fri Jan 12, 2018 11:05 pm

I like it. Got a hip hop rythm feeling when I read it.
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