Our partner

LET IT OUT WITH A SONG OR POEM!!!!!!!

Forget about mental illness for a while and just let loose in here.

Moderator: Tyler

Re: LET IT OUT WITH A SONG OR POEM!!!!!!!

Postby Tyler » Sat May 08, 2021 12:00 pm

I'm going to write the lyrics to my favorite black metal song.


AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Email me if you want a doughnut or some dairy products

Diagnosed: Schizoaffective Disorder Bi-polar type Rapid Cycling.

Forum Rules

Heck ( • ̀ω•́ )
User avatar
Tyler
Moderator: Consumer
Moderator: Consumer
 
Posts: 6072
Joined: Fri Apr 04, 2014 8:26 pm
Local time: Tue Sep 21, 2021 9:47 am
Blog: View Blog (5)


ADVERTISEMENT

Re: LET IT OUT WITH A SONG OR POEM!!!!!!!

Postby CammieMe » Wed Aug 04, 2021 2:40 am

MindAnn wrote:When the Music Fades

They loved to dance, and they danced their hearts out
They loved different beats, but it never mattered
He danced hers, she danced his

One day, they wanted different tunes
He wanted the same, and she wanted more upbeat
They loved each other, so they still danced
They would play one tune after the other

Time passed and they both grew tired
He stepped his right foot and so did she
Their legs were hurting; they had to pause
and so he slowly let go
while she tried to grab on tight

His arms were bruised by how strong she held
the music was fading, so she let go as well
The once bright light gradually turned dim

He was looking at her with confusion in his eyes
Undecided if he's to take her hand once again
She was looking at him while she cried silent tears
Confounded by what could have happened

They kept staring at each other with uncertainty
Until the music finally stopped
They both looked at each other with fear in their eyes
Fear of the curtain coming down with a single step backward

The room was full of silence and started to be covered in darkness
The curtain was about to reach the bottom
When a sound of a stiletto heel clicked on the floor
There was a gleam on her lips and she uttered,
"hum for me baby"


I understood this. Very well-written
CammieMe
Consumer 5
Consumer 5
 
Posts: 140
Joined: Mon Dec 04, 2017 7:36 am
Local time: Tue Sep 21, 2021 10:47 pm
Blog: View Blog (0)

Re: LET IT OUT WITH A SONG OR POEM!!!!!!!

Postby MindAnn » Fri Aug 13, 2021 6:01 am

CammieMe wrote:
I understood this. Very well-written


Thank you!
MindAnn
Consumer 1
Consumer 1
 
Posts: 30
Joined: Tue Jan 05, 2021 12:20 pm
Local time: Tue Sep 21, 2021 10:47 pm
Blog: View Blog (0)

Re: LET IT OUT WITH A SONG OR POEM!!!!!!!

Postby 2ost » Fri Aug 13, 2021 1:15 pm

Robert Browning Hamilton wrote:
Along the road

I walked a mile with Pleasure;
She chattered all the way,
But left me none the wiser
For all she had to say.

I walked a mile with Sorrow,
And ne’er a word said she;
But oh, the things I learned from her
When Sorrow walked with me.
User avatar
2ost
Consumer 1
Consumer 1
 
Posts: 35
Joined: Sun May 02, 2021 1:04 am
Local time: Tue Sep 21, 2021 3:47 pm
Blog: View Blog (0)

Previous

Return to Just For Fun

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 17 guests