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I have this image in my head

Postby Honkeytonk » Tue Mar 16, 2010 5:30 am

I have this image in my head
Of the final time I go to bed,
At last I must lay my head down
Which marks the end of another round.

I see a light coming near
I feel a warmth on my ear,
What is this place I am in
The sound of a heartbeat from within.

I wake again in a world of smell
Something familiar I can tell,
Old memories gone and new ones made
My soul is calm and no longer afraid.

Time passes by as I grow tall
Only to write this poem once more,
Tonight, again when I go to bed
I have this image in my head
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Re: I have this image in my head

Postby Tortured Mind » Mon Mar 29, 2010 11:26 pm

*nods* feelings I know all to well, sleep doesnt come easy but when It does, the satisfaction doesnt last. Very good poem. strong start and ending, complete as it is ;p

Take care, and Sweet dreams ;p

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